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KNAC: Chapter One-Page One

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Bye Bye color hassle~
Hello grey-scale hassle :'(

Lol, I'm vomitting art today! :D

-Chitter is woken up by another Hellish-

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MyataTheCupcake's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is really good comic art! I love how everything is in black and white rather than color, it gives it more of a comic feel, unlike comics with color. It's cool how you can tell who the speaker is by the shade of the speech bubble and the words in the bubble. It makes it very easy to follow along! My only suggestions would be to widen the lines that separate the panels a little, and to make the background a little more clear. The background is good, but it's a little hard to figure out where they are <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> So maybe a little more detail -despite how much of an annoyance is would be to do- would be a little better 83

All and all, awesome job!
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